Adequação de artigo em inglês aos pedidos de ajustes de melhoria do texto pela revista

Tive um artigo aceito numa revista de língua inglesa. Mas para a publicação eles solicitam algumas melhorias do texto, que se referem desde frases mais curtas até melhoria no resumo.
A saber:   
"The manuscript fulfilled the proposal to systematize the social and emotional skills (soft skills) important in the employability of engineers. To this end, a survey was conducted based on the Systematic Bibliographic Review (SBR). The most frequent soft skills, according to an analysis of 2638 articles from SLR, defined in the literature as the most important for the employability of engineers.

The authors seem to have carried out some interesting works that deserve to be presented in a more academic and logical way.
1.  The Abstract needs to be tidied up to improve organization and clarity. Specifically, it could be written in a more concise manner with fewer words.
2.    In the introduction part, the reasons for conducting the present work are not tangible and explicit. The authors need to be explicit what are the research gaps are in the context of the study and how they filling those gaps.
3.  Rather than end the paper with a lengthy and loose “final considerations”, it will be good to end it with a short conclusion part, reminding the present result and its significance.
4.  The Methodology part goes that “In order to have a scientific support of which articles are the most relevant for reading and elaboration of the theoretical framework, an algorithm for categorization of relevance after SBR was used, the Methodi Ordinatio”. A justification should be provided why you choose this algorithm to conduct the current study.
5.  The text contains many unclear and lengthy statements. To make the text reader-friendly, the authors are advised to stay away from long sentences and paragraphs (e.g. On 16, “The future engineer should be given the opportunity ..

.... With the new contemporary scenarios of employability.” )."